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Grade 7 2006-2007

 

 

Grade seven imagined eagles and wrote  about the images, light, sounds, questions, feelings.  Then we turned our partially poetic language into poetic language.

 

Ordinary to Poetic
Ordinary Poetic Really poetic
 eagle bald on a ragged branch spots a fish on a ragged branch spots a fish  
 at my house laying on my roof a bald eagle swooped down from the sky maybe 10 yards above me bald eagle swooped down from the sky maybe 10 yards  

 

 golden eagle soaring

ocean blue skies

circling like a planet orbiting the sun

diving 100 miles an hour

 

 
   zooming through the sky; swoop ! snatched the fish and soared off into the sun zooming through the clouded sky; swoop ! snatched the slippery salmon and soared off into the silver sunset
 eagle in a glistening tree glancing over the tree with platinum eyes scouting the place around eagle in a glistening tree glancing over the tree with platinum eyes scouting  scouting the hidden hares in high grasslands
 watching an eagle from tree diving at a rabbit to feed eagle from tree diving at a rabbit  

 eagle at the top of the tree its wings spread out as far as can be

screeching an elegant scream at the blue sky

its wings spread out

 

screeching an elegant scream at the blue sky

 

 bright day outside

sky blue as the ocean

sun shining in the eyes

suddenly a night black panther figure flew into the sun

sky blue as the ocean

 

night black panther figure

 
striking sun cut through scenery shining off the snow  striking sun cut through scenery shining off the snow  

hot evening

sunset

eagle above the creek

tree branch hangs over the creek

sunlight beside it

hot evening

sunset

eagle above the creek

tree branch hangs over the creek

sunlight
 

 bright as the sun

orange and yellow

put together

in summer afternoon on top of the tree in the hot dry day

bright as the sun

orange and yellow

 

summer afternoon

 

top of the tree in the hot dry day

 
 
i  n the crystal blue sky the sun shined like heaven's gate has opened in the jet-puff clouds  

 wind whistling in the trees

eagle gives a mighty shriek

 wind whistling

 

shriek

 

 chirping the blue sky

 

 chirping the blue sky  
  alone in the scorching days of summer I could hear winds and  bangs of hammers by the shop down below  
 slight whistle blew straight through the thistle slight whistle blew straight through the thistle  
   

frogs ribbit ribbit ribbit

eagle chowing down his fish

hoot hoot from the owls

trees whistling

 
   soft whistling breeze blows in the steady bristled trees as he swoops down under the gigantic nest of chirping hungry eaglets  
Is he giving me a sign    
What made the birds move out of the eagles way    
How does the sky stay its ocean blue color      
is the eagle trying to get my attention?      
Does the eagle want me to follow him?      
How do other eagles talk to other eagles?      
I feel that a fish or snake get scared when hunted      
I feel as if the eagle is one of my friends or family members trying to talk to me      
I feel good looking at  the great eagle      
I feel the eagle's chirp, feeling the spirits touching me

 eagle's chirp

 

spirits touching me

   
peaceful but pleasant as he sways in the empty dark sky peaceful but pleasant as he sways in the empty dark sky    

 

 


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